Tuesday, March 2, 2010

Area for Improvement

Please post any recommendations for me here.
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4 comments:

  1. JadeTMarch 4, 2010 at 9:37 AM

    The moving fish took my concentration away from the reading, because I have ADD. hahaha good blog though;D

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  2. Anna P.March 4, 2010 at 10:06 AM

    There were a lot of pronouns in your postings.

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  3. AllyssaDMarch 4, 2010 at 6:00 PM

    There wasn't very much onfrmation in the influences section, though what was posted was very detailed.

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  4. Jonathan E.March 4, 2010 at 6:02 PM

    i thought your blog had a lot of pronouns also

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